Adaptations
By Nancy Vang
Moving from place to place
from Cali to Minnesota
the time had changed
it's like radiating heat from the flames of a gas fireplace to sub zero degree frozen ice
dashing through my future
looking for the experience I have not received
felt like I was eaten
still,
seizure on searching
for piles I haven't yet experienced
seems like beautiful to beneficial
still,
past times were the best
moments of content I had detailed
contained several meanings
the beaming I had gained
it gleams of daylight through the cracks
the emitting rays of light
the radiate future I had seek,
previously unseen or unknown
to originate is to begin something new
yet,
gaze at me now
the self image has been discovered
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I really like this new version. the line "from fire to ice" really brings up a strong image. i also like that you included the cali part. The whole piece seems much more clear now and gives me a greater picture of whats happening during it. nice work!
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